Ghazal, about ghazal

شَاہِی بُلَندِی سے اُتَر آئی غَزَل

بَازَار کی نَظَر میں بَھر آئی غَزَل
لوگوں تَوَجُّہ دو وُہی شِعر سُنو
یِہ ہے وُہی اَزَل سے پُرَانِی غَزَل
دیکھو وُہی مِزَاج سَلِیقَہ وُہی
یِہ نَاگُزِیر اور لَاثَانِی غَزَل
اُٹھ کے سَراب سے نِکَل آئی غَزَل
جَنَّت کی رَانِی پیَار کی پیَاسِی غَغَزَ
Transliteration:
Shāhee bulandi se utar āyī Gazal
Bāzār kī nazar mey bhar āyī Gazal

Logõn tavajjo do vo hi shér suno
Yé hai vo hi azal se purāni Gazal

Dekho vahi mizāj salīqā vahī
yé na-Guzīr aur lāsānī Gazal

uTh ké sarāb se nikal āyî Gazal
Jannat ki rāni pyār ki pyāsi Gazal

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